| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/09/03 at 04:19 PM Branch out, exceed all bounds, expand, learn, experience, be , make room for me. Its positive. Objectively positive. I see emotions intellectually expressed. Rather intellect emotionally expressed. I clearly see a lot of understanding part of love. Rather love part of an understanding. I understand the mood. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/09/03 at 05:03 PM a very creeping poem, creeping inside. nice economy of words |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 04/09/03 at 05:24 PM Sweetie, you have a permanent place in my heart for you..MUAHS!! great poem! |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 04/09/03 at 06:58 PM This is a true organization of thought and emotion. Crisp and raw, no sugar coating here. I love this Anne, It's a bit different from your usual. Nice to see. |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 04/09/03 at 07:26 PM Dynamic and diverse writing, Anne :) |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 04/09/03 at 10:42 PM Each word is wonderful and magical. |
| Posted by Ann Krischus on 04/10/03 at 10:04 AM another winner! :) damn, you're good! |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 04/10/03 at 11:42 AM Excellent use of tension and anticipation, great job! *hugs* |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/11/03 at 04:17 PM Ah...to quote Shakespeare..."what a tangled web we weave." |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 03/16/05 at 09:17 PM don't think i ever read this. it is absolutely fabulous!!! as you are ;) |
| Posted by JD Clay on 08/21/08 at 07:12 PM One can only imagine where these scars were born let alone imbedded. But I like the direction this poem takes with a sense of positive energy leaving plenty of room for hope. |
