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In that moment {fragment}
by Betania TeschWhat layer have we slipped between,
stomping down past and holding up future,
keeping one step behind present,
out of sight--
We form in this space
constantly evading the time--
We become human in the running,
immortal in the escape.
In that moment before waking
we are indestructable--
In that moment before dying
we are timeless.
03/10/2003 Author's Note: See Waking Life, and the inside of my head. Lookit, I wrote something!
Posted on 03/11/2003
Copyright © 2024 Betania Tesch
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Bethany Lee on 03/11/03 at 02:20 AM mmm, Waking Life...makes you think. a bit long, though. and i started to get a headache and feel what he was feeling toawrds the end...i see how this piece ties in...wonderfully...*s* |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 03/13/03 at 04:16 AM Yes, the moments in between are where we live... and die... wonderful, thought-provoking poem, Bethany. Way to go. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/24/03 at 02:44 AM 'Keeping one step behind present......in this space constantly evading time (life)- we become human ( human- machine) in the running, immortal in the escape ( death). And yes, in that moment before waking we are timeless in our deaths. Beautiful realization dear Bethany. |
| Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 03/08/07 at 08:51 PM but would time exist without humans (creating it)? the ending of this game me chills. incredibly deep. ~JPP |
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