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An ascending Experience : a continued bout
by Ashok ShardaN ASCENDING EXPERIENCE : A CONTINUED BOUT
     She climbed up here When I commenced
  when I commenced abusing her I climbed
                       abusing her. up here.
Her position before My position before
 the commencement. the commencement.
 My position before Her position before
 the commencement. the commencement.
When I commenced When I commenced
  abusing her I abusing her She
descended here. descended here.
HER LADDER MY LADDER
RELATIVE POSITIONS ON THE LADDER
BEFORE AND AFTER THE COMMENCEMENT
OF MY ABUSING HER.
They adopted
ALL LADDERS to bring the other down
in order to have an ASCENDING EXPERIENCE.
When She felt that She has brought him down
He too felt that he has brought her down.
In her ASCENDING EXPERIENCE
He went down
In his ASCENDING EXPERIENCE
She went down. 01/06/2003 Posted on 01/06/2003
Copyright © 2024 Ashok Sharda
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by JD Clay on 01/06/03 at 03:06 AM You may have both undergone transcendence, while she appears the larger of the two. Nice to see you posting again my friend. Peace... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/06/03 at 03:48 AM Thought provoking as always Ashok. And I'd like to mirror JD's comment in that it's nice to see you posting again. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 01/10/03 at 05:03 AM I get a glimpse of a meaning but it only dips a toe into the well of your being... a VERY slight descent... or ascent... on a third ladder. Glad to have you back, my friend. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/28/03 at 06:02 PM wow- an interesting abstact capture of the dynamics of argument. i know what you mean by this ascension for the purpose of putting down from watching parental arguments over the years |
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