Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Rommel Cruz on 12/03/02 at 10:31 AM ahhhhh. my squeeky clean mind. now even the bees are corrupted! lol, j/k. lucky bee :p |
Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 12/03/02 at 02:44 PM Wow! Definitely added meaning to a talk about the "Birds and the Bees"! Wonderful flow, vivid, evocative. |
Posted by Ken Harnisch on 12/03/02 at 04:32 PM ah, this does cause the nectar to, um, flow...must say...:) |
Posted by Charles J Hannan on 12/03/02 at 06:49 PM mmmmm...nice poem...nectar is so sweet...MUAHS!!! |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/04/02 at 05:54 PM Ahh...now that's why my mother taught my baby sister to refer to her___ as a flower! Very suggestive poem Anne; excellent use of metaphor. Unfortunately, my lunch is almost over; no time for even a quicky in the washroom or a cold shower. :o) |
Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/04/02 at 06:26 PM Beautiful..and you look very pretty in your picture :) |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/04/02 at 10:38 PM unadorned and seemingly innocent, but for that stinger. |
Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/05/02 at 06:45 PM My, my, my. Look at you bloom! |
Posted by Bethany Lee on 12/06/02 at 05:30 PM very lucky bee, indeed...so sinfully sweet...mmmm... |
Posted by Vimal Rony on 12/07/02 at 08:34 AM One strong flower heh that can break a bee's sting.
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Posted by Jean Mollett on 06/02/03 at 12:53 AM Hi Anne,
Just read your poem, it's good. Hee1 Hee! See where everyone's mind is going. You could take it different ways. Anyhow, it's good. Peace & Joy, Jean |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/16/03 at 02:11 AM Whew!.....Charlie |