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Remembering

by Rhonda Keel

A gossamer mantel of mist thins and fades into the forest. Halo graced ripples of blue shimmer sparkle in the morning light as the sun brushes golden across the horizon, An awakening chorus of birds lending the the joy of a new dawning day.

A warm blanket the company of you as the day dawns.

Perfection.

01/13/2011

Posted on 01/13/2011
Copyright © 2024 Rhonda Keel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Paul Lastovica on 01/13/11 at 08:03 PM

each moment a poloroid, well captured & preserved. Welcome =)

Posted by V. Blake on 01/13/11 at 08:18 PM

Beautifully evocative, Rhonda. Welcome to Pathetic!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/13/11 at 09:58 PM

Nicely captured. I love it.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/13/11 at 10:18 PM

... excellent... welcome to Pathetic.....

Posted by Maria Massarella on 01/13/11 at 11:02 PM

Perfection...as are your words in painting so beautiful a remembering,Rhonda...lovely!

Posted by Scott Utley on 01/15/11 at 05:14 AM

I am talking out loud to myself, "this is beautiful, this is really beautiful." A momentous welcome to you, Rhonda.

Posted by Laurie Blum on 01/19/11 at 07:54 PM

Such beautiful and colorful images! Just my kind of poetry. Welcome.

Posted by Roger J Kenyon on 12/01/11 at 03:42 AM

Exellent and evocative Rhonda. Thank you.

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