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An Awfully Abridged Epic

by Austin Bergeron

I brought the zen
You brought the booze
We left from there
And nothing moved.
An open door
A miracle grew
Our bodies left
And now we’re through.

12/13/2009

Posted on 12/14/2009
Copyright © 2024 Austin Bergeron

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by V. Blake on 12/14/09 at 03:48 AM

I love this. And the title fits absolutely perfectly, which is something I was hoping for as that was the thing that caught my eye in the first place. Adding this to my favorites.

Posted by Steve Michaels on 11/21/10 at 05:16 PM

Story of my life! Awesome. Congrats on POTD!

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