and it's only tuesday by Lauren Singerthere's still a little
bit of you alive
in my veins
sent creeping back
through blood and skin
when i can't find a reason
to do anything
but smoke cigarettes
in the rain with my head
on my knees
thinking i'd rather be anywhere else
than here wishing i was with you. 08/29/2006 Posted on 08/30/2006 Copyright © 2024 Lauren Singer
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 08/30/06 at 05:58 AM Great image! I can visualize this scene & the emotions that go along with it. Nice job. |
Posted by Lauren Pearl on 08/31/06 at 03:44 AM this is exactly what i needed to read right now! it's nice to know i'm not alone in feeling this way. thanks for writing it, Lauren. |
Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 09/03/06 at 08:02 AM What a little gem - short, but ever so to the point. I like the way this reads. Nice one. |
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