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Hummingbird
by Amanda L Marronhummingbirds flock
feeding as rain recedes the sky
a buzzing rainbow 04/13/2005 Author's Note: entered in the April 2005 Tadpole Society, kukai contest, using "rain" in a haiku, won 7th place
Posted on 04/13/2005
Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron
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| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/13/05 at 11:51 PM ...lovely lil' ku you got going on here...i can see the hummingbirds swirling around with the fresh air, cooled by the rain and warmed too by the same sun making the rainbow, annnnd they're feeding...good, good...peace, chaz |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 04/15/05 at 06:12 AM Amanda, you are becoming my idol of ku. I liked this a super bunch. |
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