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topic: Between our broken pieces

by Amanda L Marron

There are days when things still aren’t clear to me
My efforts slowly fading
Trying to figure you out is a tiresome task
I don’t wanna give up
I don’t wanna keep pursuing
Just what can I do?

11/28/2004

Posted on 11/28/2004
Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/01/04 at 05:17 AM

Amanda, I saw your post in the forum and I hate for anyone to feel left out. Your poem shows such a clear conflict. Can we ever figure someone out? I like the tone of the poem, because while it's casual, there's an effort to resolve the conflict, whether just the narrator or the narrator and the other person. Good work!

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