topic: Broken Pieces of Us by Amanda L Marrontime ticks ever by
why must it be so long until i see you?
fading memories
only photographs that hold the better days
looking down each side street
where have you gone?
no traces of what was 08/15/2004 Author's Note: topic by Alaina Schneider
Posted on 08/15/2004 Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron
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Posted by Rula Shin on 09/07/04 at 05:58 PM “looking down each side street…no traces of what was” – though the traces of ‘what was’ exist in ‘what is’, we must look beyond the past to find them, to rekindle that spirit that once made us whole, that once made us ONE…there IS and WE are not there. We simply need to look in the right places and there we find our lost traces. Great poem! Very touching and heart breaking, though I do sense an inkling of hope yet :-) |
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