pathetic.org :: topic: breathe and i'll drift away by Amanda L Marron

topic: breathe and i'll drift away

we're floating in this royal blue lagoon

fingers barely touching

as we stare up at the sun

reflecting off the water

every breath takes me away from your touch

a ripple in this sound

pushing me farther

don't exhale

hold your breath

reach for my hand

before i drift out of your clutch

10/24/2003

Author's Note: topic provided by: Lindsay Sanders

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Lindsay Sanders on 10/25/03 at 12:32 AM

simply splendid! gorgeous imagery and a wonderful dreamlike feel. great job, i love it!

Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/28/03 at 02:58 PM

Oo... this is one of my fav's by you. umhm.

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