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Forgotten Feeling

by Amanda L Marron

is it wishful thinking?

you waking me with a kiss

can this be real?

sleeping in your arms

i've been so long without love

i forgot what it felt like


Posted on 09/21/2003
Copyright © 2020 Amanda L Marron

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/01/03 at 01:17 AM

this emotion can be captured in a sigh. i love that feeling.

Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/01/03 at 01:19 AM

Ooo! which reminds me! you should write another version of this making statements, not questions. i've found that it makes poetry stronger when you say it instead of question it. O.o up to you.

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