Forgotten Feeling by Amanda L Marronis it wishful thinking?
you waking me with a kiss
can this be real?
sleeping in your arms
i've been so long without love
i forgot what it felt like 09/11/2003 Posted on 09/21/2003 Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/01/03 at 01:17 AM this emotion can be captured in a sigh. i love that feeling. |
Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/01/03 at 01:19 AM Ooo! which reminds me! you should write another version of this making statements, not questions. i've found that it makes poetry stronger when you say it instead of question it. O.o up to you. |
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