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Count Down to the Next Day I Can Be With You

by Amanda L Marron

i feel liberated


lost in the love we share

i feel loneliness trying to take over when you're away

but i think of how you're battling the same returning feeling

just like i am

you dropped me off at home last night

almost immediately after you left my desolation recurred

i love just being with you

laying in your embrace

my head upon your chest as we sleep

i never want it to end

i count down to the next possible day that i can be with you


Posted on 09/14/2003
Copyright © 2020 Amanda L Marron

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 10/09/03 at 11:59 PM

like holding your breath. Familiar feelings Amanda. Nice job.

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