|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 08/18/03 at 04:16 PM|
Feeling a bit anxious about this upcoming one? I can relate to the tired, but I think that's just part of parenthood in general.
|Posted by Kristine Briese on 08/18/03 at 04:38 PM|
*laughing* Oh, yeah, 30'll do that to you. Pleasant read, Gavin; thanks.
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/18/03 at 09:29 PM|
LOL!!! You've just begun to run the race! Now tell me about it when you reach 70! *winks* Happy Birthday and best wishes "young'n'"!
|Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/18/03 at 10:45 PM|
Pretty soon you'll be crouched over and going through your mid-life crises... oh wait a minute that describes me. Great verse and thanks for sharing.
|Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/19/03 at 05:22 AM|
One thing when your'e over the hill you can sit
on your grass and slide.....Happy birthday when
it gets here Gavin
|Posted by Rommel Cruz on 08/20/03 at 07:32 AM|
im not yet 30 but im always tired. hmmm. wonder what will happen to me when i reach your age
|Posted by Anne Engelen on 08/21/03 at 08:04 PM|
omg...if this is turning thirthy...dang gavin, hate to see what 40 has in store! great read though :)
|Posted by Don Coffman on 08/28/03 at 06:52 AM|
Welcome to "young old age"? Heh. A very enjoyable poem with a catchy sort of pace to it. Enjoy 30, and try not to think too much about the fact that you're really working on your 31st year...errr... ;)
|Posted by Christel Crews on 09/12/03 at 02:31 AM|
cute piece- it put a smile on my face and a cold coke sounds good right now :)
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/18/10 at 04:37 AM|
Congrats on POTD. Loved the title and the build up in this one.