Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 08/18/03 at 04:16 PM Feeling a bit anxious about this upcoming one? I can relate to the tired, but I think that's just part of parenthood in general. |
Posted by Kristine Briese on 08/18/03 at 04:38 PM *laughing* Oh, yeah, 30'll do that to you. Pleasant read, Gavin; thanks. |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/18/03 at 09:29 PM LOL!!! You've just begun to run the race! Now tell me about it when you reach 70! *winks* Happy Birthday and best wishes "young'n'"! |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/18/03 at 10:45 PM Pretty soon you'll be crouched over and going through your mid-life crises... oh wait a minute that describes me. Great verse and thanks for sharing. |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/19/03 at 05:22 AM One thing when your'e over the hill you can sit
on your grass and slide.....Happy birthday when
it gets here Gavin |
Posted by Rommel Cruz on 08/20/03 at 07:32 AM im not yet 30 but im always tired. hmmm. wonder what will happen to me when i reach your age |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 08/21/03 at 08:04 PM omg...if this is turning thirthy...dang gavin, hate to see what 40 has in store! great read though :) |
Posted by Don Coffman on 08/28/03 at 06:52 AM Welcome to "young old age"? Heh. A very enjoyable poem with a catchy sort of pace to it. Enjoy 30, and try not to think too much about the fact that you're really working on your 31st year...errr... ;) |
Posted by Christel Crews on 09/12/03 at 02:31 AM cute piece- it put a smile on my face and a cold coke sounds good right now :) |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/18/10 at 04:37 AM Congrats on POTD. Loved the title and the build up in this one. |