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Intricate Unit

by Amanda L Marron

melt down and dismantle me

i've reached the forbidden heights

where is my angel moth?

as i walk out to the battlefield

where you turn me inside out

i get what you give out

false thoughts are all the things i know

implanted in my head by the evangelist

not a thing crosses my mind

as i pass the media fiend

on my way to meet with the executioner

08/01/2003

Author's Note: i saw the most incredible band play wednesday nite, their name is intricate unit (hence the title). and this poem is basically a play on their song titles.

Posted on 08/01/2003
Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/27/04 at 04:33 PM

Cool 'found' poem. Has kind of a Jimmie Hendrix feel to it.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/07/04 at 12:41 AM

Neat Amanda...Charlie

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