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Entranced
by Amanda L Marronabstract blinding colors
dominating empathy fully
generating hope in just knowing, learning more
normality obliges paragon
quickly returning safely to understanding
vitally when x-raying your zest 06/01/2003 Posted on 06/02/2003
Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/24/03 at 06:09 PM Wonderful words and imagery in a difficult format. |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 08/28/03 at 03:15 AM Very difficult format made to look so easy by your brilliance.Flows well too and that is very hard.Excellent job. |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 09/25/03 at 03:36 PM you rock. i've only done one of these and it was as a joke. :) hehehe. this is definitely a talent. way to be. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 10/04/03 at 08:38 AM another excellent use of this form... you do rock!... blessings :) |
| Posted by Richard Paez on 09/08/04 at 09:19 PM Max took the words right out of my mouth on this one. Normally these poems don't make too much sense to me, but this one you started off with something to say, and that guided your word choice well. I too have been Entranced.... |m| |
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