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Clandestine Crush

by Amanda L Marron

i can't express these feelings of mine

i'm afraid of scaring you away

so i keep them hidden deep inside

afraid that you'll know with one glance toward my eyes

the last thing i wanna lose, is you

but there's something that makes this worse

i have a crush on a girl

 

04/05/2003

Posted on 04/06/2003
Copyright © 2020 Amanda L Marron

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Shayla R Cakes on 04/08/03 at 03:40 AM

And it's on ME!! *wink wink, nudge nudge*. ... ... ... ... ... Okay so It's not on me but I like the poem as much as I would if it WERE on me

Posted by Christina Bruno on 04/09/03 at 10:56 AM

This poem is great, and it don't think it makes it "worse" because it is a girl. You can't help your feelings

Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/11/03 at 05:28 PM

oh yes, it does make it all the more difficult... traversing the land mines that is the wondering if this person would freak out if they knew. but don't feel that your feelings are bad (treasure it inside)

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 05/03/03 at 07:46 PM

this is VERY good!

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