A woman's wish...

by Katerina T Nix

So beautiful
so strange
so magnificent that curve
in your brow
and those blazing eyes beneath it.

It weakens me,
entices me

With every word and
you feed me your strength

I think I'd like to keep you...


Posted on 12/23/2002
Copyright © 2020 Katerina T Nix

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/26/02 at 07:04 AM

very passionate, evocative and beautiful

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/27/02 at 08:49 PM

Brought a *big smile* to my face. A wonderful reminder of how the little things initially attract us to someone else, and hopefully lead to an eternity of similar glanses. :o)

Posted by Lori Johnson on 12/30/02 at 03:52 PM

WOW, I don't know what I can say that hasn't already been said....except that this would should be much higher on the weekly fav's! Beautiful verse. :)

Posted by Vimal Rony on 02/07/03 at 06:28 AM

So neat and wonderful.

Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 05/15/03 at 10:21 AM

This is very delicate. The reader can almost sense the feeling of being drawn in by a pair of seductive eyes. Loved it!

Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/27/03 at 10:44 PM

Great meshing of love and possession... great wordcraft.

Posted by Alisa Js on 12/02/06 at 05:09 AM

Love the brimming promise of love hiding just behind each letter and line... the innocence is delightful as well as totally 'spot on'.. as some of my friends from Australia would say...lol.. I can relate to the message in your lovely poem in a deeply personal way as well.. thank you again for your time.. aloha..;-)

Posted by Emily Davidson on 12/06/06 at 05:41 AM

wow. so powerful in so few words. i could really feel this one.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/08/07 at 03:49 PM

This is very appealing - the "magnificent curve" took me in a direction I did not expect, which I like. "The brow" frames this poem around the eyes as they blaze and reel you in. Simple, direct ending. Thank you.

Posted by Junemarie Roldan on 05/26/08 at 12:57 AM

Who wouldn't want to keep such a creature? Fabulous write.

Posted by Scott Utley on 10/24/08 at 04:02 AM

I miss this feeling.

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