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Long Weekend

by Sean Rooney

I watched as the ash flaked off your
crimson parachute skirt and met up with
the commoners below Sun valley.

We used my letter jacket to soak up
the blood embers that had fused to my
Thunderbird, and I swear to Zeus, your
father was watching.

As valley police stalked my dreams, I soon
awoke and hid your garments beneath the old
drive in screen.

My movements from then on were strictly machine and maniacal.

My right hand snapped to the left breast pocket
of my crisp leather jacket and I removed my comb and matches.

Daddy's bottle of Johnny rested on the foot of the dash
and Sally Hanfrees body lay draped over the Zantac upholstery.

I took one last look at her shiny ankle bracelet
and followed the trail to her middle with my left index
finger before we pushed my two loves off Shane Cliff.

As the car exploded I looked at my finger that I
had planned on sucking for hours
when I noticed your insides were green.

02/06/2010

Posted on 02/06/2010
Copyright © 2010 Sean Rooney

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Therese Boling on 02/07/10 at 12:46 PM

Rebel Without a Cause goes horribly awry -greaser violence always was so close to greaser love...but at least you've got the comb.

Posted by Nanette Bellman on 02/08/10 at 03:24 PM

James Dean didn't have $#%@ on you.

Posted by Amie Golda on 02/09/10 at 05:13 AM

Lol..I have to say I agree with Nanette...This is a Caufield worthy narrate filled with wit. Salinger would be proud.

Posted by Vince Blake on 02/12/10 at 12:55 PM

You remain one of the biggest talents on this site.

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