| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/28/08 at 10:44 PM Hell yeah. |
| Posted by Keith McFarlane on 03/29/08 at 02:34 AM no kidding -- that's a spooky sensation. light in a fog and all. very nice. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 03/29/08 at 05:21 PM ...rachel, love this...i am awed by your twist with memind on the title...kudos, peace, charlie |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 03/30/08 at 10:02 AM Wow....beautifully sculpted thought. Quite nice. |
| Posted by Barbara Penryn on 03/30/08 at 02:47 PM Yes, and yet, it seems to be getting farther away. Beautifully expressed. |
| Posted by CM Bauer on 04/02/08 at 02:18 AM I totally agree. |
| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 11/30/08 at 01:53 AM partially genius i'd argue...this is remarkable in its brevity, strength and stance. love it |
