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This is the Sound of Loneliness

by Rachel C Johnson

I hate
ambient light
in the distance.

It needs to be closer.

03/28/2008

Posted on 03/28/2008
Copyright © 2010 Rachel C Johnson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/28/08 at 10:44 PM

Hell yeah.

Posted by Keith McFarlane on 03/29/08 at 02:34 AM

no kidding -- that's a spooky sensation. light in a fog and all. very nice.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 03/29/08 at 05:21 PM

...rachel, love this...i am awed by your twist with memind on the title...kudos, peace, charlie

Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 03/30/08 at 10:02 AM

Wow....beautifully sculpted thought. Quite nice.

Posted by Barbara Penryn on 03/30/08 at 02:47 PM

Yes, and yet, it seems to be getting farther away. Beautifully expressed.

Posted by CM Bauer on 04/02/08 at 02:18 AM

I totally agree.

Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 11/30/08 at 01:53 AM

partially genius i'd argue...this is remarkable in its brevity, strength and stance. love it

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