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if i were a feral woman
by Rowan LuisWith dirt in the corners of my eyes;
I would make love with a deer by cold moonlight,
for they
are the sexiest beasts in the forest 04/22/2007 Author's Note: bah. they are quite sexy. could be an alternative life plan... live off the land, mate with a deer, have weird hooved children.
Posted on 04/22/2007
Copyright © 2010 Rowan Luis
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Coleman Demiurge on 05/01/07 at 11:34 AM "live off the land, mate with a deer, have weird hooved children"... Ha! That's like totally the norm' in some of the places I've lived. But anyway, nice short piece this is - it made me "think" (which is forgivable just this once). Quite nicely done; kinda disturbing too. ;) |
| Posted by Jenifer Rokeness on 05/03/07 at 10:09 AM i agree with coleman. interesting/disturbing... but i really like it. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/10/07 at 10:33 AM I can see that happening with a "feral" woman. One for the "courageous admission" file. :o) |
| Posted by Cristy M. on 12/05/07 at 09:45 PM hybrids are sexy. |
| Posted by Nikki Benson on 05/14/08 at 07:50 PM wow... |
| Posted by S. Kathleen Smith on 05/26/09 at 10:55 PM HA! I think you're the sexiest beast on Pathetic! :D |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/09/10 at 11:52 AM A bearer of Pan-lings! Ah, to dance through the woods and leave the trappings of modern culture behind! Great verse! |
| Posted by Sean Rooney on 06/11/10 at 01:32 PM While the Wolf, perched atop his moon-soaked cliff watches the act with yellow eyes, deciding who would taste sweeter, you or the deer. |
| Posted by S. Kathleen Smith on 06/23/10 at 03:05 PM This made me grin with bared fangs. +fav |
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