| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Coleman Demiurge on 04/09/07 at 12:42 AM Ha! Now this is how a love poem is done! I adore it - I shall have to give it my Poem of the Day vote. ;) |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 04/16/07 at 06:22 PM this gave me a weird shudder and made me feel kind of warm inside at the same time... should we be worried? |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 12/26/07 at 10:09 AM kinda gross but loving at the same time...hmmm. |
| Posted by Paul Lorenz on 01/03/08 at 09:40 AM ...i am not sure if skin sheets will hold up...keep us posted...nice work... |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/26/09 at 08:05 AM now there is a surrealist picture as I've ever seen,
wonderfully imagined, and still it has me wondering
what happens to that love when it is fallen out of?
I mean how do you put the one you used to love insanely
back into her peel? |
| Posted by Sean Rooney on 06/11/10 at 01:34 PM Be careful, he may return the favor. |
