| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Cole Bradburn on 07/24/05 at 11:43 PM Incredible! I read it in columns the first time, and thought it was good. When I read lines across, I was totally speechless at what was hidden in this work. I love it, great job Coco, immensely creative |
| Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 07/25/05 at 12:35 AM i am so happy that this finally formatted correctly -- you know i have loved this piece since i first read it. kudos and again an awesome read... great work. |
| Posted by Paul Gabriel Marino on 07/25/05 at 12:49 AM i love this. i've seen this done before and this is really good. i'm glad you told me to read it. |
| Posted by Tim D Livingston on 07/25/05 at 01:21 AM Wow that's amazing. I've never seen that form before. You rocked it. |
| Posted by Bradd Howard on 07/25/05 at 11:26 AM hooray ms co... definitely beautiful and powerful... great word play. this is truly genius. Love the duality of the piece. you never cease to amaze me :) |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/26/05 at 06:34 PM coco, you are brilliant! amazing! fantastic! and you rock my world with your words! yeah, you're great and so is your writing. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 07/27/05 at 10:42 AM Yes, it can be read either way and the poem speaks in no uncertain way. The beauty is some where deep and abstract and not in the concrete external. the msg. is clear. |
| Posted by H.M Stevens on 07/28/05 at 03:06 PM I've read this four times now, and each a new meaning unfolds. Thank you for sharing. This was very enchanting and thought provoking. |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 07/28/05 at 11:19 PM this is very original & creative, Coco. Nice work! |
| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 02/05/06 at 11:15 AM i love the format of this poem and the pounding adrenaline/emotion rush in this piece. it's like nothing i've seen on here yet...and it still reeks of coco. you wonderful little lily you. |
| Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 12/13/06 at 01:31 PM i've loved this poem since the day you first shared it with me. the format, the content, everything fits perfectly. congrats on potd... even though the main pages destroys the format. (said you better lie down, the angels are watching) |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 12/13/06 at 03:37 PM I really enjoy the format of this piece! Congrats on POTD! |
