| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Delilah Coyne on 04/21/05 at 01:28 PM Looks like my vote was the last one you needed!! Welcome to Pathetic!! I really like this poem. It's got a real relaxed feel to it. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/21/05 at 03:05 PM ...coco, sometimes silence is the loudest, eh?...good poetics and glad, too, that you're here...peace, chaz |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 04/22/05 at 12:28 AM A wonderful poem. I don't remember locusts, but do remember fireflies. The images in your poem are vivid and bring together plenty of memories. Love may be blind, but sometimes I think it's deaf, too. Welcome to Pathetic, Coco!
~Chelle~
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Brett Shane on 04/22/05 at 03:02 AM loved the last four lines... flawless.
welcome to pathetic. |
| Posted by Carl Walker on 04/27/05 at 05:52 AM when marriage melds the hearts into a closeness and the words are superfulous to soul's communication
it is a sweet and holy thing
wow, what a fine poem and I agree that the last four lines are awesome, thanks, I like it |
| Posted by Richard Trotter on 04/28/05 at 07:02 PM beautifully described, your words really pulled me into the scene. |
| Posted by Shonda Chrissonberry on 05/01/05 at 11:51 PM I have sat on my front porch (alone that is) and lost a thought simply by the next thought of listening to the locusts. They are actually quite soothing. Well, sometimes.... |
| Posted by Brandelyn Wiser on 05/04/05 at 08:01 AM Wow. All of your poems are awesome. You just keep blowing me away with the stories inside and the emotions of it all. Keep up whatever you are doing, it works awesomely. coolsa. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/10/05 at 11:11 PM Love is communication in a wordless still. Good poem Coco...Charlie |
| Posted by Jason Wardell on 06/22/05 at 05:15 PM I really liked how you pulled a peaceful scene out of the destruction that locust generally bring to mind. It is generally difficult to put a situation where words are impossible into words, but you've done it well. |
| Posted by Joseff Marat on 10/27/05 at 02:14 AM This is your best piece. Hands down.
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| Posted by J. Reed on 02/03/08 at 12:44 PM Great images. They are very stark and bright. |
