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Upon Stargazers
by Trent Kirkpatrickthe moon gazes upon stargazers.
catching their lines of sight and
rendering them in silvery strings
that he weaves between the stars.
the cosmic spider.
he laughs at star maps
and the notion that constellations exist if no one is there to observe
or connect them.
04/04/2005 Posted on 04/04/2005
Copyright © 2010 Trent Kirkpatrick
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Tricia Marie Miel on 04/04/05 at 02:48 PM I was skimming through recently posted poems when the line "the moon gazes upon stargazers" caught my attention. I love the analogy! :) |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/07/05 at 02:11 PM so lovely Trent! Really enjoyable read. |
| Posted by Bethany Lee on 12/21/06 at 02:45 PM *waves hands* I am a Stargazer!! |
| Posted by Amie Golda on 12/28/09 at 04:18 AM "The cosmic spider". Very unique description. Lovely imagery too and great flow and that touch of humor brings it to life. "and the notion that constellations exist if no one is there to observe" is a paradox well observed and well versed. Well done. |
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