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Not Our Stars by Rachel C JohnsonThe stars-
stepping stones for classic cliché
and those wishing little children.
As we sat last night
and watched them shift above us
I told you what I was thinking,
I told you my dreams.
Venus set and you promised me
I'd see it again.
I've felt alone, like they say you will
when you leave like that,
but I didn't feel the urge to see (my) stars;
so I wasn't really lonely in my head.
I didn't see you, I didn't see them,
and I wouldn't have been happy
if I had.
Memory's dawning on old illusion
and lights hide evening well.
I do remember (our) stars, (our) night,
I still sit in it sometimes
(and I do love you in the dark).
Yes, "the stars are my path,
the moon as my shelter",
and all the other things I might've said,
but Venus fell, and the stars aren't ours.
You can't be wrapped up for me.
05/13/2004 Posted on 12/23/2004 Copyright © 2010 Rachel C Johnson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Richard Vince on 12/25/04 at 08:42 PM beautiful. simply beautiful. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/11/05 at 10:01 AM I really like this for its matter of fact sobering message; the third stanza especially
catchy. That last line seems somewhat out of place when considering the vocabulary of the rest of the poem. |
| Posted by Timothy Burns on 09/20/09 at 02:28 AM very lovely! |
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