explosive by J. Reed I’ve spoiled too early, dearest. Mouth full of a wicked storm, I, too, shall pass. 07/25/2007 Posted on 07/25/2007 Copyright © 2010 J. Reed Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Jon Kary on 07/25/07 at 08:38 PM There is so much energy expressed in these two lines. Thunderous, explosive, as the title suggests. You are an open conduit. It intrigues me how much thoughts and feeling this poem provokes. It has the subtle and sure essence of Mystery while also possessing a sensation of resolution, or rather, Discovery. It seems that the twin gateways to the Profound is Mystery and Discovery and I am moved that you have so clearly accessed the Primal energy. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.1 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 1 member(s) and 17 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2010 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)